Leave a review for A Future Set in Sand. - 3 by Alwaysjbj

vicki 26th July 2006 @ 01:36 pm (GMT +10)

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this is a great story - do you plan a sequel cuz man, it ended just as it was beginning. i'd love to see how you write vamp buffy and i missed the lovin' too. beautifully written, buti want more! thanks.

Mary 21st May 2006 @ 06:09 am (GMT +10)

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Excellent Spike voice.

And another great fight scene - yeah! I was a little surprised when you had Spike turn her, and would be interested to see a glimpse of their lives together somewhere down the road. That might, however, be something best left to the imagination!

Well done. Thank you so much for sharing this slice of Sunnydale with us.

Icemink 03rd May 2006 @ 08:00 am (GMT +10)

You know this is one of those stories where you understand why it ends where it does, and yet you still want to know what happens next. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

Goddessofmercy 03rd May 2006 @ 07:54 am (GMT +10)

wow. very intense. i had no idea you'd go in this director and now i'm very intrigued. the master, the annoying one and angel in on fell swoop. oh and buffy all vamped out. this should be very interesting. i wonder how she'll feel about xander as a first meal. can't wait to read more.*g*

Cordykitten 03rd May 2006 @ 07:51 am (GMT +10)

... and Spike continued to drink. In a way he is now the Master because he killed the old one I think (isn't Darla dust? I forgot; but Dru is dust and Angel is souled). So the prophecy was fulfilled. And Spike let Buffy decide and she accepted. So Spike won't be lonely. Angel tried to fight Spike for Buffy but he lost and is dust; at last Spike can keep his promise to Buffy then. :)
The end? Too bad it ends here. I could have read on :)

Sue 03rd May 2006 @ 07:51 am (GMT +10)

*pouts* You broke Buffy! *cheers* You dusted Angel...cruelly!

Very S1 believable. Trust Spike to make a Slayer his childe (found one out of the three to keep). *grins*

Thanks ever so for the bloodthirsty tale!

Botias 03rd May 2006 @ 07:50 am (GMT +10)

Great fic! I knew Buffy wasn't getting out alive as soon as he sunk his teeth in her throat. I have to admit to a little skepticism, Ok a fair bit of skepticism, that Buffy would hug a vampire. Sure she's a teenage girl, but she's very much a Slayer. I loved the way he seduced her. It doesn't seem like I see that addressed much in fic, how hard it might be to choose death.

Melissa 03rd May 2006 @ 07:50 am (GMT +10)

Very good,even knowing the premise I somehow didn't expect the end.

Shady 03rd May 2006 @ 07:48 am (GMT +10)

Sooooooo good

Especially the Xander as a snack part..*snicker*

I love how he charmed her into saying yes, as well. Beautifully written, you have such an excellent Spike voice.

Sirc 03rd May 2006 @ 07:48 am (GMT +10)

great chapter

Slaymesoftly 03rd May 2006 @ 07:47 am (GMT +10)

Yay! One of the better "Buffy gets vamped" scenarios. Believable and poignant when set in that part of that season. *applause*

Kazzy_cee 03rd May 2006 @ 07:47 am (GMT +10)

Wow! That was really dark and powerful! I wasn't sure that I wanted to read any further when she agreed to be turned, but this is was so compelling. THank you!

Missus_Grace 03rd May 2006 @ 07:47 am (GMT +10)

Whoa!

Didn't see that one coming! A little bit sad for the Spuffy if Spike believes that Dru will always have his heart, but I guess it makes sense since he doesn't even know Buffy yet. I'm sure, in time, he'll be Love's Bitch once more!

Well done.

Sexymermaid 03rd May 2006 @ 07:46 am (GMT +10)

Wow, very unexpected and twisted fic! I really enjoyed it.

Burnz 02nd May 2006 @ 10:14 am (GMT +10)

That's the end? Oh man, I want more! Good stuff.


vicki	26th July 2006 @ 01:36 pm (GMT +10)
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this is a great story - do you plan a sequel cuz man, it ended just as it was beginning. i'd love to see how you write vamp buffy and i missed the lovin' too. beautifully written, buti want more! thanks.


Mary	21st May 2006 @ 06:09 am (GMT +10)
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Excellent Spike voice. And another great fight scene - yeah! I was a little surprised when you had Spike turn her, and would be interested to see a glimpse of their lives together somewhere down the road. That might, however, be something best left to the imagination! Well done. Thank you so much for sharing this slice of Sunnydale with us.


Icemink	03rd May 2006 @ 08:00 am (GMT +10)
You know this is one of those stories where you understand why it ends where it does, and yet you still want to know what happens next. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.


Goddessofmercy	03rd May 2006 @ 07:54 am (GMT +10)
wow. very intense. i had no idea you'd go in this director and now i'm very intrigued. the master, the annoying one and angel in on fell swoop. oh and buffy all vamped out. this should be very interesting. i wonder how she'll feel about xander as a first meal. can't wait to read more.g


Cordykitten	03rd May 2006 @ 07:51 am (GMT +10)
... and Spike continued to drink. In a way he is now the Master because he killed the old one I think (isn't Darla dust? I forgot; but Dru is dust and Angel is souled). So the prophecy was fulfilled. And Spike let Buffy decide and she accepted. So Spike won't be lonely. Angel tried to fight Spike for Buffy but he lost and is dust; at last Spike can keep his promise to Buffy then. :) The end? Too bad it ends here. I could have read on :)


Sue	03rd May 2006 @ 07:51 am (GMT +10)
pouts You broke Buffy! cheers You dusted Angel...cruelly! Very S1 believable. Trust Spike to make a Slayer his childe (found one out of the three to keep). grins Thanks ever so for the bloodthirsty tale!


Botias	03rd May 2006 @ 07:50 am (GMT +10)
Great fic! I knew Buffy wasn't getting out alive as soon as he sunk his teeth in her throat. I have to admit to a little skepticism, Ok a fair bit of skepticism, that Buffy would hug a vampire. Sure she's a teenage girl, but she's very much a Slayer. I loved the way he seduced her. It doesn't seem like I see that addressed much in fic, how hard it might be to choose death.


Melissa	03rd May 2006 @ 07:50 am (GMT +10)
Very good,even knowing the premise I somehow didn't expect the end.


Shady	03rd May 2006 @ 07:48 am (GMT +10)
Sooooooo good Especially the Xander as a snack part..snicker I love how he charmed her into saying yes, as well. Beautifully written, you have such an excellent Spike voice.


Slaymesoftly	03rd May 2006 @ 07:47 am (GMT +10)
Yay! One of the better "Buffy gets vamped" scenarios. Believable and poignant when set in that part of that season. applause


Kazzy_cee	03rd May 2006 @ 07:47 am (GMT +10)
Wow! That was really dark and powerful! I wasn't sure that I wanted to read any further when she agreed to be turned, but this is was so compelling. THank you!


Missus_Grace	03rd May 2006 @ 07:47 am (GMT +10)
Whoa! Didn't see that one coming! A little bit sad for the Spuffy if Spike believes that Dru will always have his heart, but I guess it makes sense since he doesn't even know Buffy yet. I'm sure, in time, he'll be Love's Bitch once more! Well done.


Sexymermaid	03rd May 2006 @ 07:46 am (GMT +10)
Wow, very unexpected and twisted fic! I really enjoyed it.


Burnz	02nd May 2006 @ 10:14 am (GMT +10)
That's the end? Oh man, I want more! Good stuff.